The poem now reads:
the useless heads
tossed about DICE
fates CHANCEs in bitter reality
The useless heads humans in general, useless because
Tossed about dice we have no control over fate
Fates chances in bitter reality fate can roll the dice (its chances) but they are already chosen
Therefore: our reality is chosen for us.
To me, it makes more sense. The meaning is more accessible. However, it's just my personal interpretation. I can't say if I like it more or less.
-a
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